Thursday 29 June 2017

100 word challenge

My birthday present
I'm just a kid that lives with my step dad. Its boring with my step dad (i have to do jobs ). I said to my step dad “dave its my birthday tomorrow i was wondering if i can have a present” my dad said “yea” i said “can i go to mars” dad said “ maybe “ it was bed time so i went straight to bed. The next day I opened the door to go to school and there were 2 moons and rocks flying everywhere and i was so happy at my step dad i gave him a big hug.

1 comment:

  1. IT IS GOOD STORY BECAUSE IT IS 100 WORDS

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